The charts below show the differences in how people in 3 countries learned English in 2010 and 2015.
The pie charts illustrate the proportions of
people
learning English
in different countries
in 2010 and 2015.
In general, the percentage of people
learning English
online increased in all countries
while
the opposite was true for those attending evening classes, especially in country
B
. In addition
, no one went abroad to learn English
in country
C
in 2010 while
this
choice was fairly popular in the other two countries
.
In 2010, 94% of English
learners in country
C
attended evening English
classes, compared to 70% in country
A and 72% in country
B
. In contrast
, no English
learners in country
C
chose to study abroad while
the figures in countries
A and B
were 25% and 20%, respectively. The proportions of people
learning English
online were under 10% in all countries
(5% in country
A, 8% in country
B
and 6% in country
C
).
After 5 years, there were significant changes in the percentage of people
learning online, with the most noticeable being a fourfold increase to 32% in country
B
. The figures for countries
A and C
also
rose to 10% and 15%, respectively. Conversely
, the percentage of people
going to evening classes saw a downward trend, with a drop of 3% in country
A, 24% in country
B
and 12% in country
C
. The figures for people
learning English
abroad did not change much as they remained at around 20% and higher in country
A and Fix the agreement mistake
countries
B
while
country
C
saw a small increase of just 3%.Submitted by shraddhakasturi on
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