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The charts below show the differences in how people in 3 countries learned English in 2010 and 2015.

The charts below show the differences in how people in 3 countries learned English in 2010 and 2015.
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The pie charts illustrate the proportions of
people
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 learning
English
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 in different
countries
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 in 2010 and 2015. In general, the percentage of
people
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 learning
English
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 online increased in all
countries
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while
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 the opposite was true for those attending evening classes, especially in
country
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B
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.
In addition
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, no one went abroad to learn
English
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 in
country
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C
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 in 2010
while
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this
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 choice was fairly popular in the other two
countries
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. In 2010, 94% of
English
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 learners in
country
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C
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 attended evening
English
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 classes, compared to 70% in
country
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 A and 72% in
country
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B
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.
In contrast
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, no
English
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 learners in
country
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C
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 chose to study abroad
while
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 the figures in
countries
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 A and
B
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 were 25% and 20%, respectively. The proportions of
people
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 learning
English
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 online were under 10% in all
countries
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 (5% in
country
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 A, 8% in
country
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B
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 and 6% in
country
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C
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). After 5 years, there were significant changes in the percentage of
people
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 learning online, with the most noticeable being a fourfold increase to 32% in
country
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B
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. The figures for
countries
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 A and
C
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also
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 rose to 10% and 15%, respectively.
Conversely
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, the percentage of
people
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 going to evening classes saw a downward trend, with a drop of 3% in
country
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 A, 24% in
country
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B
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 and 12% in
country
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C
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. The figures for
people
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 learning
English
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 abroad did not change much as they remained at around 20% and higher in
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country
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countries
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 A and
B
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while
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country
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C
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 saw a small increase of just 3%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, english, countries, country, b, c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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