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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is argued staying in a foreign
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 would be caused crucial social and practical issues for local citizens.
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 those are possible to happen,
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, in
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 paper I will partially disagree foreign
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 would cause that way.
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, foreigners will cause social and practical problems in the
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, if they did not want to learn its local
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 well and mingle with local citizens. It will be causing,
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, make a misunderstood, an offensive and become an anti-social.
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 is because
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 is basic knowledge and communication is an essential kit to survive in a different
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. From
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, we can learn
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 culture and characteristic of
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 of
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 there.
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, there is no problem as long as foreigners are able to blend with communities.
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, living in a foreign
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 and capable to speak well precisely to make good opportunities rather than its problems. Opportunities that we can have been able to improve social interaction from there,
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 as, make a new friend, build a good connection, and build empathy for other
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.
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, foreigners which became part of the society will be able to speak a foreign
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 well gradually. In order to fulfil their basic need, they have to interact with other
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 every day and from gradual
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 it will be decreasing cause serious social problems like misunderstood. By way of conclusion, I believe living in a foreign
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 can improve social interaction.
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, it depends on the
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, they want to learn well and easily interact with others or not.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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