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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is argued staying in a foreign
country
 would be caused crucial social and practical issues for local citizens.
Although
 those are possible to happen,
however
, in
this
 paper I will partially disagree foreign
people
 would cause that way.
Firstly
, foreigners will cause social and practical problems in the
country
, if they did not want to learn its local
language
 well and mingle with local citizens. It will be causing,
for instance
, make a misunderstood, an offensive and become an anti-social.
This
 is because
language
 is basic knowledge and communication is an essential kit to survive in a different
country
. From
language
, we can learn
their
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 culture and characteristic of
majority
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the majority
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 of
people
 there.
As a result
, there is no problem as long as foreigners are able to blend with communities.
Secondly
, living in a foreign
country
 and capable to speak well precisely to make good opportunities rather than its problems. Opportunities that we can have been able to improve social interaction from there,
such
 as, make a new friend, build a good connection, and build empathy for other
people
.
Moreover
, foreigners which became part of the society will be able to speak a foreign
language
 well gradually. In order to fulfil their basic need, they have to interact with other
people
 every day and from gradual
interactions
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 it will be decreasing cause serious social problems like misunderstood. By way of conclusion, I believe living in a foreign
country
 can improve social interaction.
However
, it depends on the
people
, they want to learn well and easily interact with others or not.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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