Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

LANGUAGE
IS A WAY TO EXPRESS OUR VIEWS WITH OTHER
PEOPLE
. IT IS BELIEVED BY SOME FOLKS THAT BY USING DIFFERENT LANGUAGES THE WORLD BECOME MORE DIFFICULT. WHILE I DISAGREE WITH
THIS
STATEMENT ,
THIS
ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN MY VIEWPOINTS WHY DIFFERENT
LANGUAGE
IS CRUCIAL. TO COMMENCE WITH, THE PRIMARY REASON IS THAT LASS OF CULTURES. SINCE IF ALL
PEOPLE
SPEAK THE ONE
LANGUAGE
THEN
ONE DAY DIFFER TRADITION WILL DIE WHICH WILL NOT BE WORTHWHILE FOR
PEOPLE
.
AS A RESULT
,
PEOPLE
WILL FORGET THEIR CULTURE EASILY. TO EPITOMIZE, IT WAS PUBLISHED IN THE NEWSPAPER ABOUT 79% OF
PEOPLE
FORGET THEIR CUSTOM AFTER USING THE ENGISH IN THEIR LIFE, THEY DID NOT HAVE ANY INTEREST TO LEARN ABOUT HISTORY.
ALTHOUGH
EVERY
PEOPLE
WANT TO LEARN ABOUT NEW
LANGUAGE
SO THEY TALK WITH NATIVE
PEOPLE
BUT IF THEY SPEAK ONLY SINGAL
LANGUAGE
THIS
INTEREST WILL BE LOST AMONG INDIVIDUALS.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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