In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

If someone asks the question, “Without having what humans cannot survive?”, without any hesitation one can reply
it
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as
food
. If a Noble prize is to be given to a profession, which contributes to the
people
’s welfare,
then
Farming will be on the top of that list.
Although
there are significant developments in
the
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Agriculture, still a portion of
people
around the globe go hungry. Recent advances in
the
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agriculture include the
use
of
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tractors
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in place of an animal to dig the land,
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the use
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of pipelines to spray chemicals, etc. Some
people
may think that farming has become easier. But what we know is only the one side of the story,
on the other hand
, there are many problems.
For instance
, various chemicals have been introduced
in to
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the market, but proper guidelines are not given, which might result in over-usage of them.
Thus
, resulting in the damage of the crop and making
people
hungry for not getting
food
.
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in the world population might be another reason for the shortage of
food
. We are living in a world of increasing populations, even the advancements cannot satisfy everyone’s hunger. Government must consider implementing acts to preserve the
food
. If we look at the statistics provided by the various organizations,
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of
food
that is
consumed is less, compared to the wastage of
food
. Certain measures need to be taken to
use
the available
food
wisely.
For example
, conducting campaigns
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world-wide
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to bring awareness about how much
food
is being wasted among the
people
.
In addition
, strict punishments are to be imposed for the individuals, who waste
food
. Necessary guidelines should be given to the farmers in order to
use
the improvements in an efficient way and prevent any damage to the crops.
Finally
, to conclude, yes, it is true that there are major advances in the agriculture sector, but still many
people
are dying because of hunger.
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it is not a problem that does not have any solution. Proper measures can be taken to overcome
this
problem and there might be one day, where there will be no death because of hunger.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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