Should students be allowed to choose which classes they take, or should they be required to take the same classes as everyone else? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each approach to education? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Education is an important part of
the
society. Nowadays it has been an argument whether the Correct article usage
apply
students
should choose their own classes or follow the same classes to the others. This
situations
has drawbacks and positive outcomes. I will explain Change the determiner
situation
to
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in
this
essay
I believe,
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apply
students
who choose their own classes will tend to do good and even excel to
the chosen field. Why? Change preposition
in
First
, this
is what they want why they choose it. Think of a situation like you are being chosen to compete in a singing show because they believe that your
a good singer. Correct pronoun usage
you
This
is the same feeling can a student feel when they have the right to choose their subject. Second
, because this
is what they want they excel and even finished with high flying colors
.
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although
their
are positive Replace the word
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outcome
their negative outcome of it. One example of it Fix the agreement mistake
outcomes
students
tend to lazy
and Add a missing verb
be lazy
doesn't
want to adopt changes. Change the verb form
don't
Students
who are used to one area are afraid to do new things. They are afraid also
that they might fail if they will do it.
In conclusion, As a former graduate I would say based in
my own experience it is better if we will allow Change preposition
on
student
to choose their degree. I strongly believe that if you like what you're doing you are happy about it. but as a student Add an article
the student
a student
also
you should open to the possibilities of changes in life.Submitted by mafrancessanne on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
