News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become use to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported.

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agencies control the type of reports to be shown to
audience
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. Many times, they do not publish the important information in visual media rather prefer to present
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printed form. There are many parameters
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affect the selection; I will be
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discussing
them along with
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for creating interest in
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negative
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. I agree that emphasis should be given to positive
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.
Type
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of information to
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on TV or print media is affected by numerous parameters which
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type
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of reports available and competition to increasing the number of people connected to their group. If a video of
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or interview is available with them, they would mostly publish to visual media.
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, if they have some official
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in document form, it goes to
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form. Eye time, i.e. TV rating, have a huge impact on earning from advertisement.
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also
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depend
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on
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content
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quality in the term of
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enjoyability
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. People want entertainment whenever they are in front of
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the TV
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and negative
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are the most entertaining. So, it encourages them to show more
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negative
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though they have
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the option
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to opt for showing
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.
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these
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news
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have
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bad
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a bad
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impact on mental health, due to
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continous
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continuous
cycle of earning and desire to entertain, we are becoming attracted to them. Whereas it is beneficial for the company
operting
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operating
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, I agree it is not beneficial for
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society, because we become what we see.
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can cause distress and criminal activity in
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. In conclusion, reporting
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a major role in what people get to know. In order to maintain peace in
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positive
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should be prefered. While
reporter
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reporters
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want
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to get maximum profit out of their reporting,
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the impact
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on society should not be neglected.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Engagement
  • Relevance
  • Urgency
  • Natural disasters
  • Political upheavals
  • Public health concerns
  • Advertising revenue
  • Sponsorship deals
  • Market competition
  • Editorial policies
  • Censorship
  • Newsworthy
  • Desensitization
  • Bad news fatigue
  • Negativity bias
  • Balanced view
  • Social media
  • Viral content
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