Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

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human lives.
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technology
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relationship
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. Resulting
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development among humans.
Technology
has changed our way of interacting with other people. That has
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impact especially
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the social development of humans. With the advancement of modern
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we can now meet or holding meetings
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online. Because of
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there's a lesser chance for us to meet and socialize with
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other people.
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online I think meeting them in person is
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way and less becoming an introvert. Another reason is people now relying
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messsaging
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messaging
.
For instance
a lot of younger generations now using text even when they're at home. Many of us
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eating
instead
of talking to each other.
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in order for us to resolve
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we should limit or restrict the use of
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. Especially when it is not important. In conclusion,
Technology
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humankind.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interact
  • Social media platforms
  • Networking
  • Instant messaging
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Misunderstandings
  • Emotional context
  • Superficial connections
  • Deceptive identities
  • Privacy concerns
  • Social skills
  • Video calls
  • Online presence
  • Digital communication
  • Cyber relationships
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