Many people think that the government should spend more money on providing faster means of public transport. Some others think that there are important priorities(e.g.cost, environment). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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needs any progress overall main priorities that the

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essentially work. Here, some people believe that the

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needs to pay more attention towards the

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system while few

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that there

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so many important and necessary work which are pending to do by the authority. Here, I will illustrate

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both of the views. On the one hand , some individuals opine that public

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is a major part to get mandatory changes and improvements because people get

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jobs and some other places via public

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when they are unable to afford their own vehicles.

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, public transportation is a good source of contribution in any of the country economy so the

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much preferred to get apply public

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or lure the public to get more use of them.

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, some people think that the world is facing

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of more serious issues so the

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should give more prior to

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instance, pollution, unemployment and health

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which are increasing day by day so to get rid of them , the

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should take appropriate steps.

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, study or education is

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of any of the

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's future generations

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the

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needs to spend a big amount on these facilities to provide to the

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. Overall, it can be observed that there are so many things which should need amendments while public

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is one of them as well.