The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.
The chart gives some data about (the degrees) of pollution types which causes
according to
various reasons in Japan,
America
, China,
Australia
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and Australia
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in 2021. These causes were illustrated like
transport
,
electricity
generation
and
industry
.
Overall
, units are measured in
PPM
. The high rate of pollution was shown in China and in
industry
,
in
contrast
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,contrast
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the least show belonged to
Australia
. With regards to China and
America
, generally, the shows of
industry
and
transport
were relatively similar (80
PPM
and 70
PPM
),
in
addition
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,addition
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the minimum level belonged to
electricity
generation
with just under 60
PPM
and
this
statistic was closer to the
transport
in
America
.
Finallly
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Finally
, the top level was shown in
America
in
the
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transport
with just under 60
PPM
, on the one
hand
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,hand
show examples
the pointers of
electricity
generation
and
industry
were closer similar (30
PPM
and just down 30
PPM
). In terms of
Australia
and Japan, most of all were appreciated in Japan in
dustry
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industry
almost just above 40
PPM
,
on the
contrary
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,contrary
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the pointer occurred in
electricity
generation
approximately just above 10
PPM
.
Finally
, the pointers of
Australia
were closer to each other,
nevertheless
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,nevertheless
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the indexes of
transport
and
industry
levelled off with approximately more than 10
PPM
and the other was just under 20
PPM
.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 3 times.

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