Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people have said that the most common environmental issue nowadays is the loss of the endangered
species
of plants and animals. However
, some people have said that there are more serious environmental problems
. I will discuss my view of points and my own understanding regarding the topic on
the following statements.
According to the environmental research of the Department of Environment and Natural Resources, the loss of some endangered Change preposition
in
species
of both plants and animals is alarming nowadays and it needs a solution to resolve this
problem. Otherwise
, this
will cause a serious impact to
our mother nature to balance our ecosystem. As a matter of fact, if our ecosystem is not balanced, there will be a lot of chances to create natural calamities. Change preposition
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For instance
, lack of plant species
along the river side
can cause soil Correct your spelling
riverside
erusion
, dying polar bears in Correct your spelling
erosion
Atlantic
region can cause ice melting. These Correct article usage
the Atlantic
problems
can be managed if our government will impose awareness symposium
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symposiums
of
how to take care of them.
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Also
, aside from aforementioned
issue we Correct article usage
the aforementioned
also
have a lot of environmental problems
to focus on. For instance
, air pollution which
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
very
popular and common problem especially in cities and rural areas. Add an article
a very
Second
is the proper waste disposal caused by human
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a human
the human
being
and Fix the agreement mistake
beings
this
usually leads to unbearable floods. And lastly
the Add a comma
,lastly
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greenhouse
green house
effect Correct your spelling
greenhouse
which
is very rampant that have caused Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
severe global warming recently.
To conclude, we have a lot of environmental issues nowadays but the most serious one is the loss of the endangered Correct article usage
apply
species
of plants and animals. However
, we also
have to focus on the other problems
like air pollution, proper waste disposal and green house
effect because Correct your spelling
greenhouse
it
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we
also
need
a solution to take care of our nature.Change the verb form
needs
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