Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that it is pointless to spend time on the
protection
of wild
animals
because we
humans
have no place to live and no need for them. I completely disagree with
this
point of view. In my opinion, it is certain to argue that wild
animals
have no place in the 21st century. I do not believe that
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Earth exists only for the benefit of
humans
, and there is nothing special about
this
century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species.
Furthermore
, there is no reason why we should let wild
animals
die out. We do not need to destroy everything except for
humans
and only exist some things which are be needed by
humans
.
Humans
and wild
animals
will exist together on Earth or in the same place rather than only
humans
or
animals
exist. I
also
disagree with the idea that protecting
animals
is a waste of resources. It is usually the
protection
of natural habitats that ensure the survival of wild
animals
, and most scientists agree that these habitats are
also
part of what people live in.
On the other hand
, some people think that
protection
projects will spend a lot of money on wild
animals
, but if these
animals
die out or disappear that means we
not
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only
have
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not
any
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food to eat but
also
the environment will change.
For example
, it will cause global warming and unusual climate situations. In conclusion, I believe that we should spend some money on the
protection
of wild
animals
.
Also
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humans
and wild
animals
should exist together to live on Earth.
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