some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
A certain number of individuals trust that youngsters must do some free efforts for
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because that can be helpful for minors as well for society.Add an article
the association
Itotally
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I totally
agree
with Change the verb form
agrees
this
statement and in my following paragraphs
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,paragraphs
i
will discuss my view viewpoints with Change the capitalization
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relevent
examples to prove my opinion.
In today's era,youth is happy to help their surroundings by doing volunteering at some places Correct your spelling
relevant
such
as hospitals where they can help doctors and patients that can be beneficial for medical students.Moreover
,they will have good knowledge of humanity by working in orphonages
without any salary that will motivate them to learn Correct your spelling
orphanages
alot
about history from old generations living there.Correct your spelling
a lot
For instance
,in a recent survey, a large number of youngones
were seen in Correct your spelling
young ones
first
add camp during covid situations.
Moving forward,teenagers should do unsalaried jobs to see where they stand and they will be able see
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to see
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their
in
particular
profession.Add an article
a particular
Although
,they will not be paid for that work but
still teenagers will have good knowledge of every field.Remove the conjunction
apply
For example
,minore can save some species of animals and birds by plantinf
some trees in their neighbourhood that will be Correct your spelling
planting
good
point for Add an article
a good
community
.Add an article
the community
In addition
with
,youth can do camping in different areas of cities to help people by providing some free food and clothes who are under Change preposition
apply
poverty
line.Teenagers will become more confident by exploring the world and will get Add an article
the poverty
opportunity
to learn various cultures and languages.
To conclude,it is true that Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
everone
should get wages for their service but every person has some duties towards their community Correct your spelling
everyone
that is
beneficial for both minors and society.So volunteering should be necessary for youth's better future and sake
of Correct article usage
the sake
community
.Add an article
the community
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