some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A certain number of individuals trust that youngsters must do some free efforts for
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because that can be helpful for minors as well for society.
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statement and in my following
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will discuss my view viewpoints with
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examples to prove my opinion. In today's era,youth is happy to help their surroundings by doing volunteering at some places
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as hospitals where they can help doctors and patients that can be beneficial for medical students.
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,they will have good knowledge of humanity by working in
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without any salary that will motivate them to learn
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about history from old generations living there.
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,in a recent survey, a large number of
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were seen in
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add camp during covid situations. Moving forward,teenagers should do unsalaried jobs to see where they stand and they will be able
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profession.
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,they will not be paid for that work
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still teenagers will have good knowledge of every field.
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,minore can save some species of animals and birds by
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some trees in their neighbourhood that will be
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,youth can do camping in different areas of cities to help people by providing some free food and clothes who are under
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line.Teenagers will become more confident by exploring the world and will get
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to learn various cultures and languages. To conclude,it is true that
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should get wages for their service but every person has some duties towards their community
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beneficial for both minors and society.So volunteering should be necessary for youth's better future and
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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