some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

A certain number of individuals trust that youngsters must do some free efforts for
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because that can be helpful for minors as well for society.
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statement and in my following
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will discuss my view viewpoints with
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examples to prove my opinion. In today's era,youth is happy to help their surroundings by doing volunteering at some places
such
as hospitals where they can help doctors and patients that can be beneficial for medical students.
Moreover
,they will have good knowledge of humanity by working in
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orphanages
without any salary that will motivate them to learn
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a lot
about history from old generations living there.
For instance
,in a recent survey, a large number of
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young ones
were seen in
first
add camp during covid situations. Moving forward,teenagers should do unsalaried jobs to see where they stand and they will be able
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their
future
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profession.
Although
,they will not be paid for that work
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still teenagers will have good knowledge of every field.
For example
,minore can save some species of animals and birds by
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planting
some trees in their neighbourhood that will be
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point for
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,youth can do camping in different areas of cities to help people by providing some free food and clothes who are under
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line.Teenagers will become more confident by exploring the world and will get
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to learn various cultures and languages. To conclude,it is true that
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everyone
should get wages for their service but every person has some duties towards their community
that is
beneficial for both minors and society.So volunteering should be necessary for youth's better future and
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of
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the community
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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