In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, there is a growing debate among
people
about the future of earth
. Add an article
the earth
However
, one group of people
opines that we need to spend more money
for understanding different planet
like Mars. In my opinion, I disagree with Fix the agreement mistake
planets
this
statement instead
of that I agree with the use of this
money
for the protection of earth
.
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the earth
To begin
, there are many possibilities we can live our earth
without spending money
for migrating other
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another planet
other planets
planet
. Firstly
, reduce carbon emission and industrial chemicals in our water bodies,air and soils, instead
of this
people
can contribute more
conventional level of industrial practice to reduce pollutions.Add an article
a more
Secondly
,stop using chemical pesticides and wild forest for making agricultural activities, it mitigate
adequate environmental destruction. Change the verb form
mitigates
Thirdly
, control all kind
of harmful Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
equipments
that produces CFC in our atmosphere because it will cause cracks in our ozone layers. Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
Forr
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For
examample
, WHO 2015 environmental protection protocol suggested that buildings and electronic Correct your spelling
example
device
cost 55% of ozone depletion since the year 1998 so the law recommended minimising all these things from human Fix the agreement mistake
devices
life
for the future existence of earth
.Add an article
the earth
This
is an opportunity to reduce expensive intakes for shifting human life
in other
world.
Admittedly, it is visible that these controlling measures cannot fully Change the wording
another
fulfill
the needs of Change the spelling
fulfil
people
Reportedly, in future
growing population needs drinking water, air and food for surviving. Correct article usage
the future
Hence
, it
will arise Correct pronoun usage
apply
a questions
about shifting Correct the article-noun agreement
questions
a question
life
in
another Change preposition
to
planet
. Consequently
, still now researchers searching for a planet
is
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that is
same
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the same
like
Change preposition
as
earth
but they don't have any proper answer for this
. In addition
, if they find any planet
instead
it will be more challengeable
and expensive. To illustrate Replace the word
challenging
this
, NASA American space centre soon will start Mars mission, whereas the selected people
planning to migrate over there. On the other hand
, this
mission is very expensive and at the same time dangerous because they have to store all their living necessary items until their death to survive unstable
atmosphere of Mars
In conclusion, our Correct article usage
the unstable
planet
earth
is the gift and most valuable source of human life
that means we can't replace it with others. In my view, protect the beauty of earth
and spend Add an article
the earth
this
money
for the development of people
and restore the natural habitat.Submitted by sooryag03 on
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