In many countries, prison is the most common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is to provide people with a better education so that they cannot become criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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The word news paper seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase From the small age itself. Consider adding a comma.
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The plural verb take does not appear to agree with the singular subject a thief. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The indefinite article a may not be required with the plural noun things in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.
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It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase anyway. Consider adding a comma.
The word their may be incorrect in this context. Consider changing it.
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The word isolation doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The word the may be incorrect in this context. Consider changing it.
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that the verb work should be in the past participle form. Consider changing it.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.