Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you have moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Sam, I’m writing
this
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letter to tell you that I have shifted from Delhi to Banglore
last
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week on 31st of July. The reason why I moved to Bangalore is my new job. As you know, I was trying for Accenture
from
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last
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couple of months and luckily,
last
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week I received a letter of joining from them. My joining is from 1st of August so I moved to your city. In
the
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Bangalore, I rented a 2 BHK flat in the Ellora Apartment housing society
at
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the city
center
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. The flat is on
sixth
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the sixth
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floor and it’s very spacious, full-furnished and
well- ventilated
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.
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, swimming pool and gym facilities are all included in the house rent. You are
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staying in
same
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the same
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city and if you don’t have any plans
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this
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weekend
then
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why don’t you come to my place. It’s
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long to spend some enjoyable
moment
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with you. If you agree we can call our old friends so that we can recreate the college moments. I am waiting for
you
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positive reply
for
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my invitation, Take care, Sonam
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • relocate
  • move
  • settle in
  • residence
  • accommodation
  • spacious
  • cozy
  • modern
  • amenities
  • features
  • guest room
  • look forward to
  • excited to
  • catch up
  • explore
  • unpack
  • neighborhood
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