Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Recently, it is has become notoriously difficult for
students
to focus
on their lessons. In my opinion, this
is a partly natural phenomenon that has been exacerbated by technology
and the solutions lie in strict restriction and supervision.
The causes of a lack of concentration at school
are both the pervasiveness of technology
and human nature. Firstly
, people have always struggled to focus
. Very few students
enjoy concentrating on tedious lessons and completing endless assignments at school
. However
, this
has become worse as corporations exploit fundamental human characteristics. Research has shown that the number of hours one spends on a laptop, smartphone, or tablet has a direct correlation with a shorter attention span. The reason for this
is that technology
supplies passive, immediate gratification. Therefore
, students
cannot focus
because of a combination of human susceptibility and predatory consumer electronics companies.
The most feasible solutions are for parents
and schools to monitor students
strictly. This
begins with parents
. They must either approve or purchase a child their first
smartphone or tablet and manage their early interactions with technology
. Many parents
consciously gift young children these devices to help them learn how to use technology
and aid their cognitive development. By waiting until later in life to approve a smartphone or limiting daily screen time, this
issue can be greatly mitigated from the onset. Schools also
have a role to play as they must enforce strict rules banning the use of smartphones at school
. For example
, in many Asian countries, students
’ phones are confiscated if they are found using them during, or even between, classes.
In conclusion, a lack of focus
at school
is driven by human nature and modern technology
and parents
and schools must work together to curb the worst excesses. Government regulation would also
help but should not be expected.Submitted by dileepjosed on
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