Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is
predictied
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predicted
that convenience
food
will be considered the dominant
food
in the
next
years, which is expected to replace
tradition
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ways of preparing
meals
as well as fresh
food
. I can
therefore
only partly agree with
this
assertation because
although
processed
food
will be the common
food
for people, it is impossible
for
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to
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depanding
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depending
on
this
type of
food
as
main
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source for our diet system. One of the reasons for the increased popularity of
ready-
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ready-made
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made
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the made
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meal is that it
save
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people times from cooking their
meals
from scratch.
This
is because most of them are buzzy with doing their work and handling their lives responsibilities , which becomes more challenging to find adequate
time
for using the traditional methods in cooking their
food
.
For example
, many college
studnets
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students
eat canned
food
all the
time
,
in particular
, during their final exams as it is the fastest way to
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their stomach. It enables individuals
in
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expoliting
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exploiting
their
time
in doing things that matter most to them. Despite the benefits of convenience
food
, individuals have more awareness about the
negaitve
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negative
impact of it on health
on
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in
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the
long-term
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.
This
is why traditional
food
will not be
subtutited
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substituted
with
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processed
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a processed
the processed
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meal
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because people are going to keep cooking their
meals
traditionally whenever they are done
from
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their work and other life responsibilities. A typical example
of
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is that families have often keen on cooking their
favorite
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meals
whenever they have special occasions
instead
of buying ready-made
meals
.
Hence
, cooking
food
are
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still having a strong appeal, making it more difficult to be
repalced
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replaced
by convenience
food
. To sum up, it is estimated that processed
food
will have the upper hand over the cooked
food
in the coming years as humans do not have enough
time
to cook their
food
.
However
,
this
does not mean that they would consume it all the
time
due to their knowledge of the disadvantage of consuming
this
type of
food
in the
long-run
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.
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