In poor families, teenagers may have to work part-time as well as study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this for these teenagers. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • part-time work
  • finances
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • academic performance
  • minimum wage
  • job market
  • social dynamics
  • work experience
  • career development
  • economic necessity
  • self-sufficiency
  • exploitation
  • stress management
  • peer pressure
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