In poor families, teenagers may have to work part-time as well as study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this for these teenagers. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Ms Bell whi requires follow-up care and management from your service as she has a little infected food left foot ulcer associated with

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diabetes mellitus. She is being discharged today. Ms Bell lives alone by a less pension ,with an increased intake of alcohol and she follows a substandard diet as well.she is not fascinated in social activities, and it is found that she has difficulties with

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of hypoglycemic medication at home. Whilst our care, saline dressing to treat foot

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is provided for her

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a daily basis along with tablet glibenclamide ,which she needs to carry on with ,and

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augmentin duo forte ,which is to be reviewed after

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of the recommended dosage. In view of the above, it would be greatly appreciated, if you could ensure adherence to the suggested medication regimen, diet plan, alcohol intake , blood sugar levels and exercises as well;

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collaboration with community social worker service would benefit her to build up an engrossment towards social activities and implementation of

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activities.