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It appears that self administration is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
It seems that ulcer may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.
The noun phrase implementation seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase however. Consider adding a comma.
It appears that income producing is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).