Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the most debated point among the
people
of society
is whether to share Add an article
the society
information
or not about various fields of economy
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the economy
such
as science, commerce and education. A part of the society
is believes
that as much Change the verb form
believes
information
should be yielded while others think that some data
are too worthy to be shared. As of
my opinion, Change preposition
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information
should be shared with as many people
as possible but not in such
a way that sensitive data
is provided.
Firstly
, majority
of the Correct article usage
the majority
people
believe that they should be accessible to various information
about the field of scientific research, business and education. Certainly, this
will remove the imbalance between the sections of society
and also
be a reason for the development, by getting free access
to tips and tricks about starting a business a small businessman can develop his firm. On the other hand
, free access
of
education can benefit the children of underprivileged Change preposition
to
people
of society
. Moreover
, if the public has access
to the
scientific research there are chances that it can be developed more. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, the theory of relativity by Albert Einstein is studied in almost every school there are chances that the future physicist can develop this
theory by eliminating the limitation of the theory.
Secondly
, the information
should be accessible to people
in such
a way that it does not include confidential information
, also
if more than required
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the required
information
is provided then
it will affect the
security. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, the information
about nuclear science and defence
sector Correct article usage
the defence
it
extremely sensitive Correct your spelling
is
therefore
, the Add the comma(s)
,therefore
data
about it should not be disclosed as it will affect the safety of the nation.
To summarize, though access
of
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to
information
about various
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the various
sector
is important Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
but
due care should be taken that confidential Remove the conjunction
apply
data
is not shared.Submitted by rathodshreya2000 on
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