People can live and work anywhere they want to choose because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

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the significant development in the communication sector and the transportation department has changed the way of living

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makes it easy to do jobs and stay at

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which ever

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location they feel comfortable the advantages definitely overweigh the disadvantages in the following paragraph I'll share my explanations with my opinions.

Firstly

it is very important to communicate in your daily life either it is with family or job purpose in

this

generation it has become simple to talk with their parents or kids from different locations through mobile phones,

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and social media in the work time passing important information can be kept confidential by talking on interlinked landlines at office

furthermore

commuuncating

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communicating

can be done much faster

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in the past while using letters it would take

days

to reach

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destination

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the destination

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but now can do it in minutes.

Secondly

moving from one place to

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another

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an other

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whenever they need in a cheap and efficient way is a luxury which majority and society can experience education and finding a work which they are comfortable with would be hard if they cannot afford the

transport

however

in

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situation there are many means of

transport

like railways and motor vehicles which helps them to travel to the different places in a very limited amount of time

for example

in the old

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it could take

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to more hundreds and

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now we can do within hours.

On the other hand

inevitable that the drastic changes usage of vehicles causes serious issues

such

as traffic

conjunstion

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congestion

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and pollution human beings use there use own vehicles or public

transport

to travel but they emit some dangerous chemicals to air which causes the damage to

environment

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To conclude it is important to have

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advanced means of communication and

transport

for

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life but controlling the consequences caused by

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improvements should

also

be taken into consideration and take

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preventive

preventative

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.