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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Recently, there as anticipation that traditional
foods
 and ways of cooking
food
 will be replaced by the predominated trend of
convenience
foods
 in many developed countries. In my opinion,
although
convenience
foods
 are significantly available, I disagree with
this
 opinion as I believe that traditional
foods
 and their traditional preparation methods will remain.
To begin
 with, it is true that most
people
 nowadays do not have much time to cook
food
 as it used to be in the past.
This
 is because a substantial number of
people
 spend the majority of their time working.
Therefore
, the wide range of
convenience
foods
 in supermarkets is considered a quick solution for them as these meals can be prepared in just a matter of minutes as well as their reasonable prices are affordable for almost everyone. Having said that, the traditional cuisine and the traditional
food
 preparation methods are more likely to remain thanks to the internet. The reason for
this
 is that there are now a lot of YouTube channels that provide a thorough guide in preparing
foods
, and there are many
people
 who learned from
such
 channels.
For example
, my brother can now cook a lot of traditional
foods
 thanks to these channels. What is more, many traditional
foods
 are an integral part of celebrating occasions around the world.
For instance
, in the USA, preparing the Turkey dish is an essential part to celebrate the Thanking Giving Day. In conclusion, while the high availability of
convenience
foods
 is beneficial for a lot of
people
 nowadays, I believe the traditional
foods
 will stay around for a while as the Internet contributed significantly in attracting
people
 to learn about traditional ways of
food
 preparation and these
foods
 are a fundamental part of many cultural occasions and feasts around the globe.
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