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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#convenience #foods #methods #food #preparation
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Recently, there as anticipation that traditional
foods
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 and ways of cooking
food
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 will be replaced by the predominated trend of
convenience
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foods
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 in many developed countries. In my opinion,
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convenience
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foods
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 are significantly available, I disagree with
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 opinion as I believe that traditional
foods
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 and their traditional preparation methods will remain.
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 with, it is true that most
people
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 nowadays do not have much time to cook
food
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 as it used to be in the past.
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 is because a substantial number of
people
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 spend the majority of their time working.
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, the wide range of
convenience
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foods
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 in supermarkets is considered a quick solution for them as these meals can be prepared in just a matter of minutes as well as their reasonable prices are affordable for almost everyone. Having said that, the traditional cuisine and the traditional
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 preparation methods are more likely to remain thanks to the internet. The reason for
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 is that there are now a lot of YouTube channels that provide a thorough guide in preparing
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, and there are many
people
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 who learned from
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 channels.
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, my brother can now cook a lot of traditional
foods
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 thanks to these channels. What is more, many traditional
foods
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 are an integral part of celebrating occasions around the world.
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, in the USA, preparing the Turkey dish is an essential part to celebrate the Thanking Giving Day. In conclusion, while the high availability of
convenience
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foods
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 is beneficial for a lot of
people
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 nowadays, I believe the traditional
foods
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 will stay around for a while as the Internet contributed significantly in attracting
people
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 to learn about traditional ways of
food
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 preparation and these
foods
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 are a fundamental part of many cultural occasions and feasts around the globe.
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