Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
We are living in a democratic society where each and every individual has the right to make
their
own choices. It is important that people should understand the consequences that will arise from the Correct pronoun usage
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choice
that they make. Use synonyms
Additionally
, citizens need to analyze the options available and make the right Linking Words
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. Different people will have varied opinions on Use synonyms
level
of freedom that must be given to the Add an article
the level
children
in making their Use synonyms
choice
.
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children
must be allowed to take decisions by themselves that impacts them Use synonyms
on
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For example
, students must be allowed to make their own decision in which field they want to pursue their education. Parents or relatives should not force them. “Today’s Linking Words
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are tomorrow’s citizens”, as the famous line says, Use synonyms
children
can develop their skills in their interested domain. Forcing the Use synonyms
children
to pursue Use synonyms
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field that they are not interested in, will be like forcing Sachin Tendulkar to pursue MBBS, rather than playing cricket.
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However
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increase
the
individuality, thereby developing a selfish attitude. Change the word
their
For instance
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choice
and no one will compromise as they got habituated Use synonyms
for
choosing their own interest. Definitely, it will result in increasing distance between the friends. Change preposition
to
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varied
number of situations will appear in a similar way.
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a varied
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Finally
, to conclude, yes, it is recommended to allow Linking Words
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interest
. Sometimes, it is better to make them compromise Fix the agreement mistake
interests
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on
negative
impact in the future.Add an article
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