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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.

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In many parts of the
world
, young
people
 joining the workforce or travelling right before their orientation in university is a common phenomenon. The various outcomes of it like the lesson of pragmatism and self-assessment which are favourable for young
people
, whereas many derail from their goals and fall into depression. On one hand, working or wandering in the transition period after high school renders immense benefit to the young
people
.
Firstly
, they participate in real-
life
 perspectives to become self-sufficient which helps them to know the practical
world
 beyond the border of theoretical knowledge. In
such
 a way they unravel the actual
world
 around them which was full of infatuation and illusion to them before.
Moreover
, they learn their own self in
this
 way, which is quite imperative to prosper in
life
.
For example
, a student working in a garage or a restaurant could assess his strength and weakness regarding different perspectives like
people
 skills, management competency. For these benefits, the trend of exploring work or place before joining university has become a suitable trend around the
world
.
On the other hand
, when young
people
 complete high school, they remain
amateur
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, for which it becomes quite intricate for them to choose the right way in their
life
. Without having a proper mentor, they usually derail from their goals. Many young
people
,
for instance
, despite having enormous potential, do no join university or continue their studies.
Additionally
, many of them, having been exposed to an unencouraging working environment, get frustrated and tend to escape from
life
. After losing self-confidence at that tender age these
people
 rarely come back to the right track of
life
. In conclusion,
although
 there are several positive outcomes of young
people
 joining the workforce or having wanderlust after high-school graduation, risk factors of
this
 trend should
also
 be considered.
Therefore
, adultescents around young
people
 should always extend their hand to help them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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