Giving Detail information of Crime in Newspaper and on television has bad consequences, some suggest that government should impose some restriction on them. What extent you agree or disagree?

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that government should apply some rules on that. I agree with

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, doing any unlawful act always pushes you to bad situations. As the law has always been superior to

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. Sometimes people think that they will escape from their bad doings but it is impossible to beat the law.

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with, newspaper and television always

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us updated.

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, sports, entertainment and crime as well. Many times it happens that media gives every inch of

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or a way to escape from doing that same act. Sometimes it

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creates chaos in society as some of the

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news keeps you alert so that you can not be a victim of

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Giving Detail information of Crime in Newspaper and on television has bad consequences, some suggest that government should impose some restriction on them. What extent you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Many students find it is harder to study at university or college compared to when they were in grade school. Why is this? What are some possible solutions for this problem?

Some people say that in the modern world, getting old is entirely bad. Others, however, say that life for the elderly nowadays is much better than it was in the past. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.