Money cannot buy you happiness. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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era

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cash

become

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enormous thing in our life.With currency people can

literrly

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literally

can all things but some believe it

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give you

happiness

.

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absolutely agree.

First

foremost,

money

is the key to get

happiness

not

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whole

happiness

.

Nowdays

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social media brainwashing

messeging

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messaging

them

such

as

i

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got every girls and

moneys

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money

amounts of money

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songs

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and telling them if you get

money

etc.

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people rushing to welthness similar

like

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rats racing to cheese.

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some

of

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individuals

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the individuals

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hates

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there

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jobs but keep doing it just because of

money

.

On the other hand

,

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wealthiest

welthiest

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the welthiest

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people told them how they

become

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this

far.

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rich individuals love their works or jobs.Even

sientists

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scientists

proved that who loves what doing success chance is higher than who didn't like it.

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if someone had

bunch

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of

money

but have no friends and family how he will share his feeling.Humans cant leave without friends and families it will affect our mental health even can get

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disease

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diseases

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such

as

loniliness

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loneliness

,

deppression

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depression

, schizophrenia, cancer too. In conclusion, Society needs to understand

money

is only used

for

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key

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the key

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to

happiness

not

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full

happiness

it will get through to

happiness

.

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to cash can only buy material things not

spritual

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spiritual

things too.For

me

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i

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got

happiness

from what

im

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I'm

doing and my friends, families.Sometimes

i

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get

enjoy

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from cash but

its

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wont

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last

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long.