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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter •explain what has happened •describe the bag and its contents •say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

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Dear Sir, I hope
this
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 letter finds you well. I am writing to notify
that
Correct pronoun usage
you that
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 I left my bag
in
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on
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 the flight
last
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 week which took off on Saturday. It was a flight from Toronto to London with flight number 277AC. Unfortunately, I was busy thinking about something and I didn't realize that it was sitting on the seat as I picked it up
out
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apply
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but forgot to bring it with me
while
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 going outside. It was a black Reebok
carry on
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carry-on
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 bag having a faded look with distinct red dots on the front side.
Moreover
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, if checked the staff would have found some books in it related to my business and some highly important bank documents.
In addition
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 to that, there was
also
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 a Laptop of HP with a charger. Following up on your
airlines
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airline's
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 lost and found policy, I would like someone to either email me or contact
by
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me by
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 phone to let me know the next steps so that I can get it back as early as possible. I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused. Looking forward to your response on
this
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 matter. Yours faithfully, Karan Mehta

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task achievement
Ensure you provide specific flight details such as the exact date and time to facilitate the search for your bag more efficiently.
coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down long sentences for easier readability and to maintain clarity, especially when listing the bag's contents.
task achievement
The letter has a polite and professional tone, which is appropriate for a formal letter to an airline.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is logical and well-organized, with distinct paragraphs for different points.
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