You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to you regarding the Dell laptop, worth $1500 that I purchased from you 2 weeks ago. Unfortunately, it is not working properly because its screen goes blank suddenly more than once Linking Words
while
working for a few hours. I even showed my laptop to my techy friend but he did not get the solution for Linking Words
this
issue.
I work from home because I work with Rogers as a call assistant to the customers. Linking Words
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due to
the constant trouble with my PC, I cannot deal with customers as my calls get disconnected generally on a regular basis. Linking Words
This
is quite a serious issue that I face and my company thinks that I don’t have proper internet and they asked me to replace my connection.
I would be obliged if your company could either get it repaired or replace the laptop for me. I have my bill of purchase with me and it is under warranty. I will be thankful to you for your help.
I hope you understand my concern.
Yours sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Linking Words
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