You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter: • remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was • thank them for the card and gift • explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

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Dear Colleagues, I hope you all are doing well. I am writing

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letter to let you all know that how much I adored the gift presented by all of you.

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, let me inform you all that it was my 1st wedding anniversary. Indeed, it was a special day, and the love showered by you all made it even more memorable. I would really want to extend my gratitude to each one of you for gifting me

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a wonderful customized handmade card.

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, the exquisite standing lamp lightened up my day. Let me explain in more detail the reason. The intricate design of the lamp along with the height of it is something

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rarely available in the market.

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, making it a perfect combination for my living room.

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, I will use it to beautify my cosiest corner in the house. Certainly, I will share a photograph with you all once I am done with the decoration. I hope we will continue to celebrate numerous special events together;

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, will make memories that we will cherish forever Thanking you. Yours Faithfully, Shreya

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

186 words

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