Some people think public libraries are necessary, others believe that the public libraries are useless. What is your opinion and provide with some relevant examples.

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books are a man's best friends and there is no better
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than a
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to find a great book. While some
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argue that
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public libraries are important, others believe that
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are not useful.
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my own opinion.
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of all,
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with, a
library
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is the
place
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where anyone can find a book according to their requirement.
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,
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are not part of any college or
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, struggle to search novels or textbooks of their preference in the market.
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, the public
library
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acts as a blessing for them.
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, in public libraries, anyone can get a membership with minimal payment and can get
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to
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variety of books. Whereas, if they purchase a book online, it would cost them even more than the fees of a year's
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membership. Apart from
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, there are many individuals who are living in a joint family and does not have that much personal space where they can focus on reading. For those
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people
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a
library
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is the best
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to study since it gives them
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to a peaceful atmosphere to study. Reading in a silent
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also
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helps to improve the level of concentration.
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, one of my best friends is preparing for the civil services of India and he prefers to read at
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library
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than reading at his home because in the
library
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, he came across many
people
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who were
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preparing for other
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exams and it was quite helpful to read with those individuals since they can help
eachother
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each other
for any doubts or queries they may have. Other than
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, not everyone
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access
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to the internet and a smartphone or a computer. So, having an id for the
library
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is the best option because it
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gives them
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access
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to the computer available in the
library
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. In conclusion, considering the above-mentioned points, in my opinion, the public
library
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is very useful since, in many countries, not every person has equal
access
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to all the facilities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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