Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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and craft are slowly changing the contemporary world to a more vibrant reality. While some people believe that the

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should aid artistic professionals ,

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, I believe that

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should be funded in other alternative ways.

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, it could be argued that if a

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provides financial support to painters and musicians it can help in preserving ancient

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and promote the younger generation to indulge in artistic occupation. There is much evidence that the vast majority of the population is choosing science-based career choices which result in fewer individuals practising

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and crafts. To illustrate, the Indian

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has announced few schemes to encourage adolescents to choose artistic subjects as mainstream, Apart from these multiple heritage sites are filled with paintings done by a well-known Indian painter which later attracts a lot of appraisal from the citizens.

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, the legislative bodies should fund the

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in order to preserve ancient

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.

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, I believe that there are more arguments to support

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should be funded by alternative

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as it gives higher monetary value as well as a reputation in the industry.

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it might be argued that

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reputation emerges from the value of work,

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, I believe the auction for any mediocre craft

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creates fame in the industry for the

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as bidding inclines.

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, many painters with only limited landscape or scenery drawings are on headlines as their work has been sold in millions. In my opinion, painters and musicians should be given monetary support from other income

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as they get huge lump sums for their work whereas

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aid is very little when compared to those. To conclude,

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it is undeniable that having the

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push towards craft and music can give recognition and

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encourage youth to participate and choose

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as an occupational option,the monetary value and reputation that gets created by alternative funding

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are far better than the

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funds.

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, on balance, I believe that

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should be funded by other

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as they tend to pay more.