Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities around the world are now "one big traffic jam". How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

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has become a very well-connected place thanks to

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technology. With the development of technology, there has been a significant increase in the number of car productions.

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, the number of

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used increased. Some

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think that

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need for our life if we want to live a comfortable life while others believe that

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do not necessary for

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with, there are many

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in the

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now and

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statement can create some serious

traffic

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problems

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.

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, Istanbul is the most crowded city in Turkey.

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why

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it has a lot of

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. Many citizens repine for

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case because when they go

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or work, they have to leave at least 2 hours in advance.

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, when they arrive

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or job, they can be tired because of

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,

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statement is absolutely correct.

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,

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problem can be solved by the government. The

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solution is to encourage

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to take public transport

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of

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,

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, providing free public transport to working

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can be very helpful. Another solution is to make more roads to the most

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-intensive areas, reducing

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a little bit. For all

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reasons, the government can solve these

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. In conclusion, the

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has been developing for many years.

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, there may be some

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. The important thing here is that the

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who run the state can solve the problem. If the government can solve the

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citizens helps, the development of the

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will not be a problem.