Space travel has been possible for some time and some people say that space tourism will be developed in the future. What do you think space travel is positive or negative a development?
In recent times,
space
travel has been possible, and it is considered by some people
that it would be easy for people
to move there in the future for adventure. In my opinion, I absolutely believe that travelling into space
has a positive effect on the environment and the people
at large.
To begin
with,travelling into space
is very beneficial to human beings
. This
is because it gives society opportunities to know more about outer space
. Therefore
, human beings
know more about galaxies, the universe and solar systems by travelling into space
,Therefore
, all the knowledge obtaining
from going to Wrong verb form
obtained
space
help
in developing and improving the planet itself ,Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
for instance
, recent studies carried out by Russian
and the USA astronauts help to developed more satellite on the globe which is used by networking providers on the globe surface.
Correct your spelling
Russia
In addition
, travelling into space
whether for adventures or to improve science is also
advantageous to our environment. This
is because the planet itself is overpopulated with human beings
, and the earth
natural Change noun form
earth's
resources
are declining every day. However
, going to space
can solve the problem by reducing the number of people
on the earth
surface when society moves to Change noun form
earth's
space
. Many studies have shown that there is a higher number of natural resources
in space
compared to earth
. Capitalize word
Earth
However
, moving to space
can help by bringing natural resources
to use on the earth
which would eventually increase the number of natural resources
available on the earth
.
In conclusion, I agree that travelling into space
has a positive effect on human beings
and its surrounding
.Fix the agreement mistake
their surroundings
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