ome working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

Parents who are busy earning to support their family in

fininacial

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financial

needs

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supports when it comes down to taking

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of their young ones

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, leaving them with two options either seeking grandparents support or paying the childcare

centres

to replace the busy parents. Personally, in my

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it is better to choose a

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daycare

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day

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daycare

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care

centre for their babies.

To begin

with, in the modern era both men and women are forced to work rather than stay at home without contributing to income.

Hence

, few of the community choose grandparents as their option as they are more

trust worthy

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and believe that the old

peple

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people

are entitled to look after their grandchildren. Another issue why few of the crowd dislike the idea of daycare

centres

is due to the fact that they have to pay

professiosnals

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professionals

to leave their children under their supervision.

Firstly

, I'll recommend the

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caregivers

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care givers

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as they are trained in

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field

thus

providing

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better assistance in enriching the young child.

Secondly

, the

centres

gives

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a good environment for them to spend time because they meet new kids and learn to associate with children their age rather than depending on elderly people.

Therefore

, the babies are kept busy till their parents are available to pick them up to go home. Grandparents might be more trustworthy and flexible compared to these

centres

but it is not ethical to burden the elderly with young kids as they are more

challeging

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challenging

to take

care

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should be given more attention due to their budding stage.

Finally

, it may be concluded that it is better to choose daycare

centres

in my point of view as it has more advantages.