A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is often argued that a
person’s
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value is judged by their social
status
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and belongings or not.
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I agree that their value is judged by their social
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on some occasions, I think that their personality,
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as honour, kindness is
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crucial
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factor to consider a person. On the one hand, social rating and material possessions are definitely used to judge a person, especially when
people
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are looking for their partners or boyfriends. Recently, there are a lot of dating apps. With these apps,
people
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can fill their preferences
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as occupations, salary, and educational background to find someone they want to go dating. Since
people
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cannot know other one’s personalities before meeting in person, on
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occasion,
people
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tend to judge
people
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by their social
status
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. In Japan, one survey shows that more than 80% of women, who joined dating apps in 2020, answered that they care about their partner’s social
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. That’s why I agree that a
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worth is sometimes decided by some factors like their social
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.
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,
people
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still regard old-fashioned values as important. On many occasions,
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as hiring new employees, marriage, building
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with new friends, their personalities are more important than their social rank. In fact, demand for famous brand cars, watches and bags are decreasing among young
people
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in the world in the
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decades, while many young
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spend money on their experience, like travelling abroad with friends.
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cannot live without relationships with others.
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,
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still care a lot about a
person’s
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personality. To conclude, though I agree that on some occasions, a
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worth is judged by their social rank, I think that
people
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still think old-fashioned conscience is more important when they build and develop a relationship with others in society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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