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Some people believe that we should do our best to mitigate the effects of climate change, while others believe that we should learn how to live with it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is considered by many that
people
 should do their best to lessen global warming’s effects, but others believe that we should get used to living with it. I think that despite being the irreversible impacts that global
change
 brings about, we exactly seek to solve
this
 problem rather than accepting. On the one hand, without taking precautions, the condition of the world can become worse or deteriorate by only learning how to live with climate
change
.In the past, weather
conditions
 went on normally and those were indifferent to that.
Therefore
, we should make
people
 more conscious of its effect and take some measures to mitigate it.
For example
, the government and conservation organizations promote
people
 to get about using biodegradable materials
instead
 of using disposable ones
such
 as plastics.
Hence
, we might contribute to
this
change
 positively to be a reversible effect.
On the other hand
, those in favour of getting used to argue that
this
 situation becomes irreversible matter think that
this
 situation becomes irreversible, which does not help
people
 stop
this
change
.
Thus
, ones which encounter problems related to climate
change
 must get used to situations, resulting in decreasing its harm and damage and
thus
 saving
people
’s life.
For instance
, in northern Turkey towns flood with heavy rain, and landscapes occur more often compared to the past because of global changes.
Consequently
, inhabitants should readjust to new
conditions
 by changing town plans or the location of their houses. In my opinion,
although
 climate
change
’s impacts are being more apparent day by day,
this
 problem only solves by humans.
However
,
this
 comes out with human mistakes, it will simply be sorted out by them. If the government and all societies cooperate, and they are educated about its adverse effects, I think we cope with
this
 situation. In conclusion, even if
people
 prefer to spend their time getting used to the world’s extraordinary
conditions
, they must tend to be cared to stop these
conditions
 by being increased their awareness.
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