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Some people think that single-sex schools are better than mixed schools. Others believe that mixed-sex schools are the only way for children to learn. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

#people #schools #mixed-sex #children
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 in the present generation that which education system has the better outcomes.certain amount of people says that
single
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single-gender
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gender
 institution has the benefits while
other
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others
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 think that co-education has more use for
students
 in their future.I agree with
later
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 statement and divulge my opinion
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 following paragraph.
Firstly
 it is inevitable that having girls and boys under has many advantages to their future they can communicate with different
gender
students
 very easily and
this
 can improve the skills of communication which is
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 factor to get
better
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 job in the present situations
furthermore
students
 can socialize with
opposite
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sex
 classmates and have better knowledge on how to behave with other
gender
 and can learn to respect them despite
sex
 difference
for instance
 in work women and men have to do communicating and respecting each other which is difficult to the
students
 from
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sex
schools
 compared to
mixed
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mixed-gender
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gender
schools
. On the
otherhand
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other hand
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children
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children
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 from
single
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single-gender
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gender
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 converts have better academic results and
more
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are more
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 focused on their career in
single
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single-sex
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sex
schools
 they
donot
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do not
don't
 have any sort of distraction that could
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effect
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 the marks they can score.
similarly
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 boys or girls can softly
focused
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 on
the
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education and not having other feelings disturb their concentration on study.
however
, after
schools
students
 talk and
hangout
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hang out
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 with other
gender
 kids so
this
 could have some limited advantages. To conclude,
mixed
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gender
 education is useful in the development of skills and can make it easy for
students
 to survive in the
competative
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competitive
 world.
single
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single-sex
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sex
schools
 have less uses in
this
 present
situations
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 in the employment sector.
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