In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

In most
of
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nations,biological parents are allowed to decide to send their wards to one-gender institutes or mixed-sex academies.A certain number of individuals believe that
pupils
learning from single-sex faculties have consequences in
future
.I partially
agrees
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with
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I will discuss
both
viewpoints and will give my opinion with relevant examples. On the one hand,
pupils
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are studying in single-sex schools are more into their studies rather than being in relationships.
For instance
,in a survey
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in 2020, single-sex institutes had more percentage of passed students rather than others.
Moreover
,many wards are not able to present their real role and their ability
of asking
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questions in front of
class
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full of boys and girls due to their shy nature.
Last
but not least,
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pupils
are being bullied by the opposite genders like boys are
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tortured
touted
due to their skinny body and girls due to fashion reasons.
On the other hand
,there are some consequences of sending
pupils
into one-gender faculties
such
as they will have lack of confidence while talking to other people in
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future
because they will face
both
genders at their workplace.
In addition
,due to
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compition
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competition
wards will stay at one point and will not do more efforts to increase the percentage.For illustration,according to professors,it can be seen that in normal schools,peers with different genders are co-operating with each other and learning things quickly due to
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competition
. To conclude,it is clear that there are
both
pros and cons of sending
pupils
into
one-sex
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academy because they will not be confident in the
future
and will have lack of
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competition
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composition
.So,guardians should think about
both
statements before taking any steps for their child's
future
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • social interaction
  • real-world preparation
  • gender stereotypes
  • academic performance
  • healthy competition
  • personal and professional settings
  • reinforce
  • collaborate
  • representative environment
  • promote gender equality
  • break down stereotypes
  • social pressures
  • academic concentration
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