In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?
In most
of
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apply
the
nations,biological parents are allowed to decide to send their wards to one-gender institutes or mixed-sex academies.A certain number of individuals believe that Correct article usage
apply
pupils
learning from single-sex faculties have consequences in future
.I partially agrees
with Change the verb form
agree
this
thesis,in my upcoming paragraphs
I will discuss Add a comma
,paragraphs
both
viewpoints and will give my opinion with relevant examples.
On the one hand,pupils
those
are studying in single-sex schools are more into their studies rather than being in relationships.Correct pronoun usage
who
For instance
,in a survey cunducted
in 2020, single-sex institutes had more percentage of passed students rather than others.Correct your spelling
conducted
Moreover
,many wards are not able to present their real role and their ability of asking
questions in front of Replace the preposition
to ask
class
full of boys and girls due to their shy nature.Add an article
a class
Last
but not least,mostly
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most
pupils
are being bullied by the opposite genders like boys are tortuted
due to their skinny body and girls due to fashion reasons.
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tortured
touted
On the other hand
,there are some consequences of sending pupils
into one-gender faculties such
as they will have lack of confidence while talking to other people in there
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their
future
because they will face both
genders at their workplace. In addition
,due to less
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fewer
compition
wards will stay at one point and will not do more efforts to increase the percentage.For illustration,according to professors,it can be seen that in normal schools,peers with different genders are co-operating with each other and learning things quickly due to Correct your spelling
competition
compitition
.
To conclude,it is clear that there are Correct your spelling
competition
both
pros and cons of sending pupils
into one-sex
academy because they will not be confident in the Add an article
the one-sex
future
and will have lack of compition
.So,guardians should think about Correct your spelling
competition
completion
composition
both
statements before taking any steps for their child's future
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