It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that
money
is the most significant thing in the
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world
for
human
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. Many people did not
prever
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prefer
give
money
for
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someone or borrow I and often avoid that.
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essay will
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discuss
this
issue and provide my opinion. In many
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friendship
friendships
frindship
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the
money
is
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issue because all the persons like to keep their
money
for
thier
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their
life and family. To
illstrute
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illustrate
,
the
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life is
an
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expensive
nawadays
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nowadays
and we need our
money
for
self
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ourselves
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when
give
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money
for
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friends
their will
contounu
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continue
ask
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ever
every
mounth
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month
and that will
cusse
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cause
curse
some noise. So, many people did not provide any type of borrowing for
friends
or any person.
However
, many people believe that
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real
friends
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always
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help
athers
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others
in all
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. For
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example
, In Saudi
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if
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close friend will inter the
persion
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person
by
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with
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money
all
friend
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friends
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collect
money
for
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help
to did not enter prison.
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behaviour
provide the major mean for why we make
friends
. In conclusion,
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although
the
money
is
importent
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important
issue in all the relationship but I
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completely
agree with that true and real
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friends
can not be
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effected
affected
or damage by any quantity cusses.
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