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Some people say that modern communication technology means that good handwriting is no longer necessary. Others believe that good handwriting will always be an important skill. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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handwritten
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beautiful handwriting is not required anymore. Others
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 argue that
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good handwriting will always remain an essential
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This
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good writing
skill
. A handwritten
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good handwriting requires time and effort.
In addition
, a virtual message on a handy gadget is undoubtedly faster than
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handwritten
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beautiful handwriting to communicate is no longer required as now everybody prefer to communicate over spontaneous messages that require no beautiful handwriting yet is understandable to everyone.
on the other hand
, another set of individuals still believe in having good handwriting skills.
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handwritten
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 in their day to day life. Any compromise in handwriting can lead to complications in understanding the message which can
further
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Therefore
, having
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good handwriting eliminates the probability of miscommunication between the writer and the reader. In my opinion, dispute the technological advancements in
communication
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good handwriting should always remain an essential
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good handwriting has evolved us and have bought us where we are. Conclusively,
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 having a beautiful handwriting
skill
,
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, it should always remain a mandatory
skill
 in humans forever.
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