One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
One of the outcomes of an advanced medical system is that men and women are
life long
. Correct your spelling
lifelong
This
essay will argue that although
it is impacted on governments finance, the mitigating of suffering means that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
In conclusion, longer life expectancy far outweighs the disadvantage of administration budgets. Human life is more precious than money, so admin people should implement healthcare services in a whole nation.Submitted by denny.mathew66 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite