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Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do. What are the problems associated with this? What is the best way to achieve a better balance?

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Now in the world, people want to achieve
work
 and life.
On the other hand
, the job will be neglected and it is hard to balance it,
also
 the stress will increase a lot. To solve
this
, make some schedules, so you don’t have to worry about
time
 allocation. To keep balanced, one of them will be unsteady.
For example
, some people might think a job has
more
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higher priority rather than family, but
for
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those men or women, they do not have enough
time
 to spend on family. Whereas, if they spend a quality of
time
 with their family, they will fail their
work
.
In addition
, people who put their family above
work
 must have stress not to make mistakes. For
this
, it is good to find new hobbies or spend
time
 with family by playing with children. To solve these problems, making schedules will balance better. Making a schedule can decide when to rest or how much
time
 to spend on life. There will be no worry, so at
work
, they can focus on their
work
, and
also
 they can get
time
 for their family. Another, they can
work
 online. They do not have to move from the house so it is easier to contact with family. In conclusion, keeping
work
 and life
balanced
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 is difficult, but at the same
time
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 it is very important.
As a result
, planning and decision making
is
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 important to solve
this
 problem.
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