The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
The report derives from the pair of line graphs which illustrates the change in
percentage
of electrical appliances used for doing hours of daily chores from 1920 to 2019 in a country.
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the percentage
Overall
, the usage of electrical appliances, especially refrigerator
has Correct article usage
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whereas
the numbe
of hours for doing different housework around the house has significantly decreased.
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graph one, we can see that Correct article usage
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