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In Some Countries young people are encourage to work for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies discuss advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

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The given topic is highly controversial.
However
, If a glance is taken at the pros and cons of
this
 aspect, It is irrefutable to say that there are multifarious advantages after high school. Students do
work
 for a
year
. I hereby give the following arguments to support myself . Commencing with a
first
 and foremost point in the list of my knowledge is that If young
people
work
 on
travel
 for a
year
then
 , they can know crucial of money . How can earn money as well as they can become independent
.
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 Apart from
this
 , if students
travel
 to other states and they can get a lot of knowledge about the culture and lifestyle and so on after that, they can know how to live outsides and
also
 family important and they can become more strong family bonding .
For example
 , Nowadays , most young
people
 visit other countries for
work
 and
travel
 . they know how to
work
 and how to live there and so on . they get a lot of knowledge
then
 , they can not face any problem in future because they know how to challenging problems and they have already especially experience .
Consequently
 , young
people
 should encourage to
work
 or
travel
 yearly.
however
 , there are some disadvantages associated with it as well . If young
people
work
 or
travel
 for a
year
then
 , they can not complete study on time and they waste the time . For namely , In India, some Indian government jobs hiring according to the limited age . If they spend time on
work
 or
travel
. they can lose government jobs because they already expire to the age and
also
 they cannot complete Study After analyzing the matter , It would be right to say that despite a few disadvantages, many advantages after rank higher . Though , they should encourage to
work
 or
travel
 for a
year
 after high school .
Therefore
 , they can know the significance of everything ,
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