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Some people argued taht if children behave badly,their parents should accept responsibility and also punished for the behaviour of their children do you agree or disagree.

#people #taht #children #parents #responsibility #behaviour
Children
 behaviour and punishment is becoming a controversial issue in
this
 modern era. Some analysts think that
parents
 should take
accountabilty
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accountability
 for
this
 , whereas others refute it. I agree up to some extent with the aforementioned rubric due to some notable reasons. I would like to present my views by diving deeper into the topic before deducing a reasonable conclusion. It is
beleived
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believed
 that for
misbehaviour
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the misbehaviour
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 of
children
,
parents
 only cant take the credit for their
children
 discipline.They are in
a
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age and they are
influnced
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influenced
 by external factors
such
 as peers,social
backround
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background
,schools and have the tendency to make them
to
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behave in
abnormal
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 way.Blaming the
parents
 can create more pressure on them and can create more strict restrictions which can lead to
negative
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 psychological development of a child.
In addition
 to
this
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 it will make them
to
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feel
lack
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 of freedom which is very necessary at
this
 of life.
Furthermore
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 some
children
 are more
agressive
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aggressive
 and stubborn in nature and it is very difficult to control them.
This
 attitude is impossible for
parents
 to control and
certain
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at certain
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time
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times
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 they give up teaching them.
Children
 are in a that,they
dont
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don't
 really realise the errors and
its
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 consequences.
On the other
hand
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parents
 play a pivotal role in
eductaing
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educating
children
discipline
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 to direct them
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a
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 right path with a
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positive
 approach.
In addition
 to
this
parents
 have to be role
model
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 for
children
 explaining the errors and
its
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their
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 consequences
instead
 of giving strict punishment. To encapsulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that it has both positive and negative aspects but, I believe it depends on the parent as all
parents
 are different and they can assist their
children
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 with proper measures and guidelines.
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