Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent years, many countries have abolished the
death
sentence in their laws and a large number of people
are starting to wonder what it will be like when there is no the
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death
penalty. People
have actually differed about it. I agree with the idea that government should retain the death
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in their law.
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execution
First
of all, capital punishment
curbs the crime rate in society because the purpose of the death
penalty is not only to punish serious offenders,
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also
to be the most severe warning for those who intend to commit similar crimes, thus
minimizing the repetition of similar crimes in future. For intance
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delinquents
create
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such
as treason, massacre,drug trafficking,... will become an example to deter citizen
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citizens
Furthermore
, reducing the num of criminals will in turn improve the safety of the community, therefore
creating a safe society where people
can best develop in both personality and intelligence.
By contrast
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death
penalty but still
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,still
For example
, in Norway, instead
of punishment
, they believe that prisoners should be converted, rehabilitated and restored to dignity. It is a humanitarian policy. Nevertheless
, most countries still enforce the
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punishment
because they believe that there should be mechanisms to prevent law breaking
so that innocent Correct your spelling
lawbreaking
people
can live a peaceful life.
In conclusion, despite the fact that capital punishment
has some disadvantages, I strongly think that it proves to be the best way to control criminals and to indirectly protect model citizens.Submitted by thientrang1616 on
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