Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years, many countries have abolished the

death

sentence in their laws and a large number of

people

are starting to wonder what it will be like when there is no

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death

penalty.

People

have actually differed about it. I agree with the idea that government should retain the

death

excution

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execution

in their law.

First

of all, capital

punishment

curbs the crime rate in society because the purpose of the

death

penalty is not only to punish serious offenders

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but

also

to be the most severe warning for those who intend to commit similar crimes,

thus

minimizing the repetition of similar crimes in future. For

intance

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,

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delinquent

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who

create

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a sensation

such

as treason, massacre,drug trafficking,... will become an example to deter

citizen

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from following said acts.

Furthermore

, reducing the num of criminals will in turn improve the safety of the community,

therefore

creating a safe society where

people

can best develop in both personality and intelligence.

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, there

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some countries without the

death

penalty but

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have a low crime rate.

For example

, in Norway,

instead

of

punishment

, they believe that prisoners should be converted, rehabilitated and restored to dignity. It is a humanitarian policy.

Nevertheless

, most countries still enforce

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capital

punishment

because they believe that there should be mechanisms to prevent

law breaking

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so that innocent

people

can live a peaceful life. In conclusion, despite the fact that capital

punishment

has some disadvantages, I strongly think that it proves to be the best way to control criminals and to indirectly protect model citizens.