Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years, many countries have abolished the
death
sentence in their laws and a large number of
people
are starting to wonder what it will be like when there is no
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death
penalty.
People
have actually differed about it. I agree with the idea that government should retain the
death
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execution
in their law.
First
of all, capital
punishment
curbs the crime rate in society because the purpose of the
death
penalty is not only to punish serious offenders
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but
also
to be the most severe warning for those who intend to commit similar crimes,
thus
minimizing the repetition of similar crimes in future. For
intance
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delinquent
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who
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a sensation
such
as treason, massacre,drug trafficking,... will become an example to deter
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from following said acts.
Furthermore
, reducing the num of criminals will in turn improve the safety of the community,
therefore
creating a safe society where
people
can best develop in both personality and intelligence.
By contrast
, there
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some countries without the
death
penalty but
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have a low crime rate.
For example
, in Norway,
instead
of
punishment
, they believe that prisoners should be converted, rehabilitated and restored to dignity. It is a humanitarian policy.
Nevertheless
, most countries still enforce
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capital
punishment
because they believe that there should be mechanisms to prevent
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so that innocent
people
can live a peaceful life. In conclusion, despite the fact that capital
punishment
has some disadvantages, I strongly think that it proves to be the best way to control criminals and to indirectly protect model citizens.
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