Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. In what ways are computers a hindrance? What is your opinion? Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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is considered as an essential tool which everybody must

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one but others argued that it is

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hindrance that can lead to negative consequences. In

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and cons

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I will give my opinion.

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, I believe that

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is one of the most relevant inventions during the

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century due to the fact that it has changed our way of living

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today It is possible to do everything sitting in front of the screen for

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we can read a newspaper, watching a film and

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attending a lesson online.

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us to work in distance, far from our office and the importance of that come out during the lock-down when the companies were closed and the people started to work from their home.

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several people think that

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can be useful, someone else said that it can be more a hindrance with adverse consequences

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our personal dates could be stolen by

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hacker who has access to our device,

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particular for youth, the

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can be a problem because teenager could spend too much time in front of the screen

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of going out and having

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in real life. In conclusion, I think that

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can be extremely useful but we have to know the critical and adverse consequences

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using

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device and

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could be important for young people who use

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every day meanwhile they ignore the risks