Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Recycling
of
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waste
is one of the trending
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of today’s era. A lion share of
people
argue
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that there is a lack
recycling
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of recycling
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of garbage produced by home. In order to manage, the
government
should enact strict laws. I completely accord with
this
statement and discuss my views in
upcoming
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paragraph before forming an opinion. To commence with,
a new recycling laws
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new recycling laws
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should be
decree
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to manage the trash problem. Authorities should make
a legal obligations
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legal obligations
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to divide the degradable and
non- degradable
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waste
in
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different bins and pack them separately. Masses should follow
reuse
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, reduce and recycle
rule
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to minimize the number of
waste
that ends up in landfills.
Moreover
, there could be heavy fines and other punishments for
people
who
does
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not obey the rules.
For example
, the
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of Canada prisoned more than 300 citizens in 2010, who were
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to adhere
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recycling law. As moving
further
,
Government
regulation is needed because
people
are out of time to save the environment and conserve natural resources. The soil, water and air pollution is increasing rapidly and is causing
death
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of flora and fauna.
Government
can
also
start some programmes so that the rubbish can be recycled at a larger scale and the environment is made clean.
For instance
, The Prime Minister of India
Mr.
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Narendra Modi initialized a programme named “Swach Bharat Abhiyan” which means clean India.
This
programme
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on keeping the country clean and propagates the need
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recycling
waste
material. To recapitulate,
Government
should make it a legal issue and punish
people
who are reluctant to recycle their household trash. In the end, it is better to force
people
to pay a fine now than to pay with their lives later in a world which can no longer sustain life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Waste management
  • Mandatory regulations
  • Compliance and enforcement
  • Recyclable materials
  • Circular economy
  • Landfill diversion
  • Conservation
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sanitation services
  • Public policy
  • Behavioral change
  • Eco-consciousness
  • Resource recovery
  • Single-stream recycling
  • Waste hierarchy
  • Economic incentives
  • Ecological footprint
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