You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: • Explain how you knew about the plans • Describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighbourhood • Suggest a possible solution to the problem.

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letter regards to, the idea of building an airport in our area. The news was the highlight of yesterday’s The Hindu newspaper. People of our area are apprehensive about the same news, and they planned to forward a duly signed petition against

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issue to the concerned authorities. • Our

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men are from low-income family backgrounds, and they do not have another alternative to move to another place. Apart from

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, children are studying in local schools, and adults enjoy their retired life in their families. It may be not easy to migrate to some other place in a short span.

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, once officials begin the construction, it is difficult to bear different types of pollutions like air, water, and noise. • As per the

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official’s suggestion, there is a highly recommended landscape in the

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, and still, yet nobody acquires the property for any other procedures. In my opinion, it may be the exact location for the newly built airport rather than our countryside.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Some people say that all popular TV programs should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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