You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: • Explain how you knew about the plans • Describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighbourhood • Suggest a possible solution to the problem.

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•I am writing

this

letter regards to, the idea of building an airport in our area. The news was the highlight of yesterday’s The Hindu newspaper. People of our area are apprehensive about the same news, and they planned to forward a duly signed petition against

this

issue to the concerned authorities. • Our

village

is very popular for agriculture, horticulture and other botanical inventions and its’ sale.

Village

men are from low-income family backgrounds, and they do not have another alternative to move to another place. Apart from

this

, children are studying in local schools, and adults enjoy their retired life in their families. It may be not easy to migrate to some other place in a short span.

In addition

, once officials begin the construction, it is difficult to bear different types of pollutions like air, water, and noise. • As per the

village

official’s suggestion, there is a highly recommended landscape in the

village

, and still, yet nobody acquires the property for any other procedures. In my opinion, it may be the exact location for the newly built airport rather than our countryside.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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