in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In some nations,
people
are become obese, while their overall health and well-being are falling, as a result
. This
essay will indicate that the root cause of this
problem is their eating habit and illustrate a ban on junk food
as a viable solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
The principal cause making people
's well-being degrade is trash food
over-consumption. Although
some fast food
such
as hamburgers, pizza are ubiquitous, ready to serve instantly, these kinds of products contain a lot of fat and calories. Because people
now are eating too much of this
high-fat fast food
, this
has a knock-on effect on people
's wellness, as a result
. In fact, it was highlighted in a study conducted by Havard University in 2011 that there is a strong link between fast food
overeating and liver cancer.
The most feasible response to tackle the issue is a ban on producing fast food
. That is
to say that, this
will keep people
away from the aforementioned lurking dangers, and also
force people
to manual prepare food
for their meals instead
. Resulting
that, Add the preposition
fromResulting
inResulting
People
will give up consuming these dangerous products and come back to the day of the 20th century when there are no fast-food
chains such
as McDonald's in the market.
In conclusion, the current health crisis is caused by over-reliance on unhealthy food
, and imposing a ban on fast-food
consumption is, to me, the best way to address the current problem.Submitted by Quan pham on
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