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Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Immigration has led to a number of
people
 relocate globally.
Majority
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 of the
people
 relocate, especially to a developed
country
 for a better standard of living.
i
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 personally believe
this
 is a helpful development
where
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wherein
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in
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people
 from many underdeveloped or developing nations get an opportunity for a better future.
Firstly
, Since the population on Earth is not evenly distributed, globalisation helps to eradicate
global
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 shortage of manpower requirements and proper utilisation of resources in many countries.
For example
, countries like Canada have inadequate manpower compared to the area of the
country
.
On the other hand
, A
country
 like Pakistan, have surplus manpower but lack adequate jobs and
also
 the
country
 finds it difficult to provide better services due to overpopulation.
Moreover
, Immigration leads to diversity in the
country
.
People
 from various
relegions
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religions
religious
,
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ethnic
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ethic
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ethnic
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 groups and cultures can develop an understanding about each other's tradition.
This
 will ultimately bring global peace and unity
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 society.
For Instance
,
India
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in India
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,
people
 celebrate all festivals from different
relegious
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religious
 groups,
this
 has helped
people
 learn about each
others
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other's
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 traditions and increased the unity among them. In conclusion, I believe that globalisation is more beneficial in order to balance the overpopulation crisis and promote unity among
people
.
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